is my model photography good enough to go pro?

here's some shots i took at a show. Does it look on par with what you import model fans are used to seeing? I'm trying to compare my stuff to what i see in mags, but i'd love some fans or models opinions. These link to my tumblr site and not spam i assure you!!  

Shot one, two girls

Shot Two: lovely asian model

thanks kindly

rob  

Sorry bro but I would say no. No offense but she looks kind of average. Look at girls like natasha yi or alexia lei. Or some of these import models that have actually been feature in magazines. To me a girl has to have a little extra something somethin to be a legit import model.    

It's "ok" .. what is your set-up?  Seems like you don't use an autofocus  or flashes..